All Comments on 'Outback Steakhouse'

Proof read. Edit.

This may well be a great story. Unfortunately, I gave up the third time you confused your genders.

As earlier.. Proof read. Edit. Involve an editor.

Detailed, not too long-winded, double suspension, clear and picturesque language. This is probably one of the bests I've read on this website.

Perhaps just a little grammatical mistakes here and there, but generally fabulous. Perfect for my taste!