All Comments on 'Overdressed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
what a fantasy

Just one of many fantasies that I have yet to explore. Great writing. I wish it were me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
it was a great story

The story was amazing and very well done however there were a few typos or misspelled words that detracted from the story. Overall it was an awesome fantasy and one i would love to have some day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No proofreader?

The story was good, but too many mispellings was distracting.

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelover 9 years ago
RAWR!

This was HOT! Your profile says you are male and straight, and you certainly write sex like one! But I loved your detailed descriptions of clothes--there aren't many straight guys who can do that. :-D

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