by scarfaccio
This was HOT! Your profile says you are male and straight, and you certainly write sex like one! But I loved your detailed descriptions of clothes--there aren't many straight guys who can do that. :-D
The story was good, but too many mispellings was distracting.
The story was amazing and very well done however there were a few typos or misspelled words that detracted from the story. Overall it was an awesome fantasy and one i would love to have some day.
Just one of many fantasies that I have yet to explore. Great writing. I wish it were me.