All Comments on 'Owning Bella Ch. 02'

Poor Bella! Once again fabulous, I love it when things don't go all Mels way! Guess they are learning together. Thanks for another great chapter. m.

Both "Owning Bella" and "Mastering Bella" have continuously evoked the strongest emotions in me, I honestly wish I had an "Ellie" myself, so much that it hurts. Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for these stories - they're a major anti-depressant

Poor Bella! I would freak out also in her place... Adding some sub-drop experiences to the scenario (she is definitely experiencing that!) and its a disaster! I am loving Master Rob taking charge of the abused subs! I wish he was real! Hopefully you will be able to update soon... Thanks!

I'm so glad you're continuing Bella and Mel's story! Your writing pulls me in so deeply, and I am always impatient for more. Thank you for sharing with us, and I look forward to more chapters!

I'm not sure if I am enjoying this, but I find it compelling. I don't find humiliation and name calling erotic, but the rest of the action is.

I find myself wanting to scream at this 'experienced' master that he is a stupid fuckwad. Even if he is so hopped up at finally having his fantasy, it is no excuse for the way he has handled what he claims to hold precious. And none of these other experienced people who care so much about her could anticipate this? Zero to a hundred with a newbie........

I'm looking forward to how you handle the aftermath of this FUBAR situation.

I love Bella. She is a strong submissive even though she is new in her training. *****

I loved the scene they did in the playroom. I also feel so bad for Bella. Mel's really going to have to open up a little more. Great story! I'm really enjoying it.

He so deserves to own Bella more!!!

That something bad is going to happen to bela... I hope Mel will have a taste of almost losing his slave. I want to see the sofer side of him as he mend her after an ordeal!!!

Pls tell me something terrible is going to happen to Bella!! Looking forward to your next chapter!!!

And I really really live your writing!!!!!!!! ESP venturer series!!

When's the next installment? I am loving this and do not want it to conclude anytime soon! Great work X

He had become someone I hated ...just taking her over in a week with little thought to her feelings whirling around .Still will never be able to accept the humiliation side of this ...pain with love ,maybe but the humiliation just sickens me .

I think you are off to a great start here in developing out Mel reevaluating his responsibilities in this relationship. I look forward to seeing more of it!

What I like about this is that I can relate so much to Bella. Being intelligent yet so... Innocent and child like in nature. Being dramatic, it's but that I guess by time you let out, it's a mess. The yearning to be adored, favored, understood.. I like seeing Master crack in realizing his emotions and deep feelings for Ellie.. becoming more malleable 😈