All Comments on 'Oyster Creek Ch. 10'

Two things that seem to appear a lot in stories by many authors, guys are always growling...really, isn't there a better word? everyone always seems to annouce they are coming. Isn't that kind of obvious by how your body is reacting? Does everyone really need to announce it to their partner?

Overall I thought it was a good read and I liked it.

Though, I can't really see how this can work out. Even if the guy stays, is it really realistic to expect he keeps his position, or that the Jenny/Lucy will still do the grunt work. Also, the 2 girls are well off, but not nearly as much as the guy's family and the store won't have as much to cover startup costs.

Finally, unless he suddenly gets serious about Claire, there's not really any1 to keep him there exclusively as the 2 sisters pretty much fuck whoever...

Nice story. But...American girls don't say " fancy, as in I would fancy that" or whilst.

Keep up the good works.