All Comments on 'Paid Vacation Pt. 02'

by professorjames

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great

Just as good as the first. Creative

obedient girlobedient girlalmost 20 years ago
OHHHH YESSSS!

You got my attention in Chapter 1 and I have been looking for Chapter 2 every day since. Keep this story going. Does it have to end in 2 weeks? Maybe they could get marrooned or something! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
my dream!!!

Have we met or did you just read my mind from afar? This is my dream sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great story!

I loved chapter 1 and have been looking for 2 - it didn't disappoint!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sultry!

Evocative and a delightful getaway! The interaction between people is just as good as the sex. ;) A pleasurable read to say the least. Keep them coming, please!

AfroerotiKAfroerotiKalmost 20 years ago
Bravo!!!

I'm always intrigued with getting into the mind and soul of a submissive and betraying their most perverted and depraved desires. You have done this well with your words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

That is all I can say...and where can I find some of that? Mmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmm

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxover 11 years ago
spelling

"peak her imagination" should be "pique her imagination"

exciting story with odd little spelling mistakes that interrupt the flow.

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