All Comments on 'Paid Vacation Pt. 02'

"peak her imagination" should be "pique her imagination"

exciting story with odd little spelling mistakes that interrupt the flow.

That is all I can say...and where can I find some of that? Mmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmm

I'm always intrigued with getting into the mind and soul of a submissive and betraying their most perverted and depraved desires. You have done this well with your words.

Evocative and a delightful getaway! The interaction between people is just as good as the sex. ;) A pleasurable read to say the least. Keep them coming, please!

I loved chapter 1 and have been looking for 2 - it didn't disappoint!

Have we met or did you just read my mind from afar? This is my dream sex.

You got my attention in Chapter 1 and I have been looking for Chapter 2 every day since. Keep this story going. Does it have to end in 2 weeks? Maybe they could get marrooned or something! :-)

Just as good as the first. Creative