by purringlady
Might turn him into something other than a piece of shit
Cruel, sick, and poorly written. Not only are you screwed in the head, but you completely lack creavtive writing skills. Burn the tips of each of your fingers with a cigar so we never have to hear from you again.
Gave up reading after the first couple of paragraphs due to poor spelling
Very promising, liked the suspenseful ending, just lacking in a lot, sorry. Premise was excellent, a rewrite could make it wonderful.
If you review the studies on women's sexual fantasies (see the collection in "My secrete garden) you'll discover that over 75% of women's' most popular fantasy is of being raped.