All Comments on 'Panty Games Ch. 01'

Liked the story very much. I did notice a couple of things that would help with the next chapter; don't use rate for right, as in "I set rate next to him" and I noticed that a lot of your sentences when your talking start with "So". Neither of these are deal breakers, but they are something that could be changed to make the story better.

I'm not a big fan of cotton panties but that's my problem. Waiting for chapter 2.

Rite is something you perform, as part of a larger event, generally involving religion. Right is the word you're looking for. Use it.

One typo and that's your comment? Settle down dmitri.

God I would love to cum on her panties