All Comments on 'Paradise Lost'

by Kinky Rachel

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tdelain69tdelain69about 20 years ago
Could have a Sequel

MMMMM, this has the makings of many more exciting stories. Please write more of this adventure!

juanjsojrjuanjsojrabout 20 years ago
a second prat and more should come with it

great story you should do more I like it alot

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice start on what should be a great adventure!

Vivid descriptions and subtle handling of the psychological twists in the story. Love the naughty innocent and bashful cousin dynamic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Minus one for the nine incher.

Minus another for the oversize boobs. I'm about normal as have been my various lovers. The poor lovers among them would not have been any better if they had 9 in cocks.

The good one's didn't need 9 inches to produce great orgasms nor double D's to inspire them

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 7 years ago
Wonderful

Loved it, maybe Milton will decide to stay and look after Auntie as well as cousin. Now that would be a hot story.

Slithy2013Slithy2013about 5 years ago
Dubya

I liked it, I gave it four stars, but I would have addressed any negative comments to the Mango Mussolini!

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