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Click here"Well what do you think you want some company?"
"Why not if you think you can handle it!"
"Oh I think I can handle it!"
She then lowers herself to her knees and sucked my cock till I came!"
As we made our way to bed we talked about how we were going to leave in the morning. She told me that she had her flight changed and would be out by 7:00AM
And that she would call me as soon as she could get a flight to me. Now being that Chris's flight was at 2:00 pm she would get home before him. We fell asleep and I was awaken at 5:30 by a pair of lips on my cock as I looked down she was naked and her ass was facing Carlos. She looked at me and said>
"Good morning, last day"
As she worked my cock Carlos got up and buried his head in her ass again. This time it was a fast fuck and suck. We all came quickly! After we finished she cleaned up walked up to the bed kissed Carlos on the lips and said goodbye! Then she made her way to my bed gave me a long kiss and said.
I'll see you in a couple of days. With that she walked out, Carlos said thank you that was incredible.
Over the next couple of hours we got ready to leave. I felt like shit telling Chris that I didn't see her. But I was sure that eventually he would find out what happened, I fucked up what can I say.
- COMMENTS
tazz317about 5 years agobut what opened the dialogue in the first place, TK U MLJ LV NV
Youamiover 5 years agodrakeme
I have to agree with my fellow commentators when they draw attention to the obvious confusion you appear to experience in your portrayal of Maria, who seems to have at least two different personalities. However, my focus is on the development of plot and characters. After reading your tale, my impression was that all the characters without exception were juvernile and immature asswipes. Your Cancun plot location and the descriptions of erotic behaviour were those that I would normally ascribe to a very poor adolescent's depiction of pornography, and far from what I would normally expect from an adult author of erotica. I think the descriptive word I'm searching for is CHEESEY! Hell, I'm not expecting a tale that reads like fucking Shakespeare or Henry Miller, but for fuck's sake most of the readers on Literotic are adults (or should be!) and deserve to be treated as such. This submission was an insult to any adult reader. I respectfully suggest that if you ever consider sending any further stories you need to seriously lift your game!
jbpeters74almost 6 years agoThis goes directly into the unbelievable, she goes off the rocker, and for some reason the last day the whole group doesn't get together. It would have been much better in her unrealistic reaction, that Maria tortures Chris and rubs his face in it if she wanted revenge. Maybe she tells Chris that she is going to have her threesome, not with him, but CC and Carlos. CC is a dick, no friend at all.
Why did the author never finish the story.
