by CharlieL
We need more like this on these pages. Too many of the others are wham-bam-thank-you-mam sex stories and as a female I don't appreciate them very mouch.
This one had all the sex I ever needed, in fact I was soaked after the first couple of paragraphs all the way to the last few.
Give us a Chapter 2 on this one. PLEASE
THis man can really write. I felt as if I was right there with them during the whole story. His description of the sex scenes had me hard as a rock the whole time.
I can only hope he will give us another Chapter in this saga.
This author has the ability of bringing the reader right into the story and then if it's a sex scene the reader can get as aroused as the principals in the story. Nice work.
What can I say ... This is a super story with all of the sex one could hope for. Whichever way you go there is that type of sex for you. I Hope we see more of it from this author.
This author has the ability if bringing the reader right into the scene. I was dripping wet as long as it took me to read the thing. All I can hope for is that the auther writes more like it.
....was gay along & Jim just took him out of the closet!
He goes from being her savior to threatening her himself if she doesn't comply with his own wishes!
Beside being rife with numerous bad and played out tropes, the protagonist is a douchenozzle.
Who likes this tripe and what is going on?
Just annoying, even for porn.