All Comments on 'Parting Gift'

Thanks for sharing.

WHAT HORSE SHIT!

Nicely written, had a couple of bloopers such as "pasted" instead of "past," but all in all a good go. You are a clever lad!

I liked it. Anytime a loving couple plays among themselves it's a wonderful thing.

What?

Wait. I'll fill in the stalker's comment for him. Let's see how stupid he is.

JUDAS

Meaty cock sucked. Cornhole buggered. Betrayed.

nice to see a whore not really be a whore.

Had me completely fooled.

A good story, thanks for the read.

greasing up his pooper, he gulped a salty load, betrayed!

I rest my case.

I am surprised that the angry clouds did not produce undeserved precipitate lightening strike. The anticucks should have been seething by then!

It became clear to me what was happening about a third of the way through and from there on I could only appreciate the workmanship.

Obviously the writer wanted us to think the wife was 'showing off' for the husband with her lover, in this case she really was, but with a toy instead of the real thing, Thanks for a nice fun read. One thing this story does prove is that not ALL loving wive stories are about cheating sluts and their cuckolded husbands. This wife does sound like an "Adventurous loving wife" so again well done for writing something different.

and trips galore means friends for life. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good turn around there at the end.

...with only one tell-good job.

I loved it i'm ( ROFLMFAO )

and clever,can't believe anyone stupid enough to knock it

I thought it was obvious from the outset, then it became clear that the references were deliberately ambiguous. Therefore, Hubby's arrival was unlikely to go anywhere except where it DID go! It WAS well-done and hot, so

4*

XDXD so random

Very slick! Enjoyed the humour thank you!

A neat and happy ending for both.Too many of these stories end with the husband pissed off.

1F18

It's great to think you people can do common decency and respect. Not to mention a nice little surprise twist. Never saw the dildo as a possibility.

I'll give you *4 for the surprise. Great story Tex.

This story got me good. Well written.