All Comments on 'Pati Wreaks A Terrible Revenge'

And a little anti-climatic. I wanted a description of his discovery, whenever it happened.

Very impressed you write very well in an interesting and entertaining way. The sequel could be amusing I hope that you will write about Pati again.

simply unpleasant.

No woman could fuck that much, could they? Just kind of a strange story.

horrible and unreal

Some good writing with an inventive plot, but it would have been a better story if edited down a notch or two. What was in the envelope delivered near the end? How does the revenge come to light for George?