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Anonymousabout 20 years agoWell written, but the ending's not good enough
Technically this is a well written piece, but the plot's ending is quite weak.
FINCabout 20 years agoThe ending twist was excellent
The husband got what he wanted, as did the kidnappers, as did the hillibillies. And so did we! I can only imagine what filthy games these boys will get up to with her.
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