All Comments on 'Pauline's Anniversary'

Excellent Job!

Will the real JPB Step forward? Good story Bob.

I like that our protagonist didn't wimp out by accepting her actions or becoming a voyeur/cuck (those stories are gross).

Not a wimp!

Finally writes something where the husband doesn't suck the dick of the guy fucking his wife and? He can't finish the story! Have that problem with your partners Bob? Maybe thats why you spend so much time writing crap stories

Nice little story. Of course the wife is an idiot and way over the top. The guy is a dope for forgetting about their anniversary. I guess I have to ask if you love someone as much as he said he did his wife HOW do you forget your anniversary plans? But her reaction was insane. The black guy was too stereotyped to be believable.

A fast moving and very interesting story. Well worth giving a read. Thanks

,,,,when the wife is that stupid and outrageous.

burn her ass Bob

NOT

I had to choose between giving it 1* because I hate it and 5***** because I love it and decided to rate it 5*****s.

I didn't read the story so I won't give it a score. I just wanted to thank you for the N... word warning in the intro. I'm a white guy but I hate that word and I think you use it too often. Regardles I like most of your stories and thank you for them. Jim

If you don't want to be associated with a particular word or symbol or person , then you don't associate with it- it is hypocritical to expect someone else to not use a word when you do it all the time. Black folks use it all the time - I would therefore assume that they are not offended by it.

"please don't do this to us." damn that was funny. 5.

with totally unbelieveable characters.

to treat a stupid cheating cunt. Glad he had some balls.

She got what she deserved. Thanks.

Cheating cunt looking for an excuse to cheat,

The first night at the club he didn't get a lap dance. That seems to be a significant oversight, especially seeing how seeing the lap dance was what sent her over the edge.

And the wife screwed up even though he didn't get the lap dance at first. Another slut wife from JPB. Funny stuff. Although once again, I would like to see the ending.

Are retards and Both deserved what they got. It is NOT OK to cheat. She is a hateful cheating cunt. He is just as bad. If you are married, then paying a strange naked woman to sit in your lap and have her rub her tits in your face is still cheating! What is the difference between getting a lap dance and a wife letting a stranger rub his cock all over her face in a bar parking lot? How would that make a husband feel? It's not OK just because you PAY for a lap dance.

Now don't get me wrong. There's nothing wrong with a lapdance. As long as you are single and not in a relationship. Once you commit to someone then extra 'fun' outside that relationship is cheating.

Stupid fucking cunt. He was an asshole for forgetting the anniversary but she went to far. Divorce the cunt.

and a woman scorned isn't to be trifled with. TK U MLJ LV NV

only one question, why were the neighbors clapping? how long was it really going on?

He needs to divorce the slut first and THEN play with the redhead. That way he's in the drivers seat for the divorce as she has committed adultery and he hasn't. Time to keep more of the assets in the divorce and throw her ass into the gutter. He should have sent her off with her black lover.

Is this the infamous Pauline French (One of JPB's recurring minor characters.) in a starring role? No matter how much revenge fucking he gets, he MUST get rid of Pauline - soon.

most serious thing about this story was the complacent brag made by the black man about the law being on the wife's side and that therefore the white hubby might as well get out right then. But for the apparently myriad white women on this site who slaver at the thought of black cock I do recommend doing a Google search on the American artist Ashley Olsen and see how she ended up in Florence Italy and what she was doing when she was murdered.

What kind of man are the husbands this author writes? I mean for a woman to even think this shit up and then have the nerve to do it tells me the men are doing something wrong. I have been married 20years and I guarantee my wife would know better to even attempt the crap this author writes. I just can't wrap my head around it.

yet another story with no ending !

JBP has been writing this stuff for years. It is fiction mixed with satire. If you don't like his stuff don't read it. There are thousands (literally) of other stories to amuse you.

I just don’t get it. These men are such pussies and liars. They can’t tell themselves the truth of their wives.

The say they live their wives but their actions are totally opposite. If you love your wife you sit down, talk, and try to,work things out. Giving up says "I don’t love you and never did".

Piece of shit humans. The wives have more character than the men and they cheated.

If you ditch the bitch and play your cards right!

Why didnt he beat his ass soon as he came home and found them? Threw them both out.

Thanks for trying.

This is fucking pathetic. JPB I thought you were supposed to be a legend around these parts for you BTB stories. Yet I find rancid cuck shit. Help a guy out to understand this shit?

Not one of my favorites. At least the stereotypical big black ass got his clock cleaned this time. Now divorce the birch and move on.

He's SUPPOSED to be a legend. But looking at his stories, I find very few to be satisfactory ready. There's just too much hype around him, I guess, because he's a long-standing writer.

In truth, he sometimes just plain sucks.Case in point, this piece of shit

Sigh........JPB certainly has a BBC fetish.

Well! Where is the rest of it?.

What a crap! i guess The story is Based ob acheap Porn movie The author saw The Day before ... Just to make some cucks Licking their Lips when they read in all Length About Black cocks

What have you done to the anonymous that trashes every story you write? True, this is not a great story. But, it is not deserving of the slanderous comments that this anonymous person seems to always make. I didn't like the story much and would probably have given it a 2* or 3*, but am going to give it a 4 to make up for the other anonymous. WAIT! Maybe this is JPB doing a hatchet job on his own work to get sympathy.

I would have kicked them both out naked!!! Keep their clothes inside...

The only reason to read this is the beat down on the oh so stereotypical , big black dildo. Kicked his naked ass out the damn door.

Another story that could have had another few paragraphs to hear about the outcome.

Before kicking the guy out of the house he should have administered a good nut cracking...

Can anyone be that stupid? I suppose that some are. Just, please, keep them away from me!

As soon as I saw … “as black as the ace of spades” I stopped reading! I figured if she could cheat even though her husband forgot their anniversary, it was a shit marriage any way.

Absurd drivel by JPB. One more "sci-fi" about "insane females".

Just another load of crap.

I gave it a pass because you warned that you were going to indulge yourself in your racism. What the f*** is wrong with you? Get help.

You nailed it. Some of these commenters have led sheltered lives. She did what she did to hurt him and to hurt him as badly as she could. That’s why she chose a black guy, she thought it would hurt him more. Most people are not as “racially correct” as some of the commenters seem to think.

Les

Your stories always end up the same without a real ending

I always laugh when I read comments complaining that a JPB story doesn't have a "real ending," so I decided to let everyone know how this ended: Our hero went to Denny's, met up with Tiffany and then fucked her. The next day he started the divorce that got Paula out of his life.

3 Stars, I'd give it 5 if it was finished.

JBP has only written a handful of stories where the ending was ambiguous or open.

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All the rest, like this one, lead to an obvious conclusion. In this story, divorce.

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Just because another story line can be tacked on, doesn't obligate the author to do so.

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JPB, take the cry for an 'ending' as a complement. You've left the audience wanting more, which is generally considered a 'good thing'.

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Poeple, if you want more, then read another story. Otherwise, you can always pick a biography, with the known in advance ending, "then he died".

This was a great story and Bob is a great writer. So,Pauline was so uninformed that she did not know what a lapdance was nor what took place in a strip club. She actually thought her husband was fucking the redhead when she looked in the strip club. So, she thought she was justified in going out and meeting a stranger called Leroy who was a black man and she brought him home and fucked him all night and into the next day. Then she realized that Bob, her husband, never fucked the redhead in the strip club but he was leaving the home they had together now to do just that. She pleaded with Bob not to do this and not to throw away their marriage when she was the one who destroyed their marriage by fucking LeRoy. Great story! Five stars for sure!!!