All Comments on 'Pavlovian Conditioning'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Start

You should probably be more careful about language and word choices. The word 'skinny' has a negative connotation. Use of alternative words such as 'slender' or 'slim' is preferable.

Describe the girl's hair color as 'ebony,' instead of 'ebony colored.' Readers know the hair is not wood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
skinny is negative?

Don't listen to that guy, skinny doesn't have any negative meaning. Ridiculous!

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