All Comments on 'PayBack Ch. 05'

Good series, always interesting!! Keep it up.

Tops--more, more, more--After the month, all the females want to stay and stay and fuck, fuck, fuck. Great story.

I was waiting to see how you would include the mothers of the youngs men who trash the house also. Why did you stop at only the ladys' mothers especially since mothers are protective of their sons?

This was a good series of chapters, but it seems to be missing an ending. Maybe something about the mothers getting shared with his well-hung friend and enjoying it so much that they deside to keep being with him and his active imagination (and the well-hung friend as well). Maybe another way this could come together is,if the daughters find out what the mothers are doing for them and instigate a three-some (and fun for all). But maybe not that idiot Will, who has to be the most incompatant dickhead I have ever heard of. If he didn't push it and maybe thought about it a little, he may have been able to join in on the fun.

You should publish . I want to see more of this. I want to buy your book .

Love the story line

Can you add more ?

I have just read through this series and really enjoyed every one of them. It seems to me that it is begging for a finale maybe spread over 2 or 3 chapters.

There is so much that you can use from these and with your excellent writing I'm sure that they would be very much appreciated.

thank you for the series to date but please please finish it off with a bang. Blindfolded girls being eaten by their mums.....??? Then the blinds come off .....

This needs to be finished badly. I don't normally read these but I read another of your stories and decided to try this and found it to be a very enjoyable read.

Please finish this series,

If you don’t know which way to go, lots of great ideas can be found for cast members

This is a very erotic story with lots of possibilities for more chapters -- perhaps a GB with Will's friends coming to enjoy Casey and Crissy -- another GB for Sandy and/or Fran -- and how about introducing Sara to anal sex! There certainly seems to be a demand for more!

Loved the unexpected outcome. Wonderfully imaginative.

I am glad that when I checked I note that you are still writing. Please continue this excellent story. I am looking forward to the mothers and daughters discovering the truth and scenes of them together in the basement.

more please update us on h ow it is going with the sluts

NEED MORE. SANDY NEEDS WILL FOR HER HUSBAND WHEN SHE DELIVERS THEIR BABY! WHOOPS!

Please continue the series