Payback: The Beginning

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He was hard again so he slipped his cock into her pussy, to lube it with her juices. He thrust into her, enjoying the feel of his balls slapping her clit. He could feel her pushing back towards him and knew she was enjoying his cock.

He leaned forward and whispered to her,"Keep licking that pussy, no matter what, you hear me? No matter what I do you had better keep your face tight against her cunt, you got me?"

Casey mumbled what sounded like a yes as she nodded her head, never taking her mouth from Crissy's cunt. Will pulled his hard slick shaft out of her snatch and placed the head against her ass hole. He felt her stiffen and start to pull away from him as he did so.

He leaned forward and whispered, "Keep licking and don't pull away!"

He pushed his hips forward until he felt the head of his cock pop through the sphincter circle of her ass. He could feel her tremble and hear a small mewling sound.

He leaned forward and whispered,"It'll feel better in a few minutes sweet cheeks, bare with it and your going to like ass fucking."

He knew that slow or fast, one was as good as another after the head was in, so he shoved his hips forward burying his cock into her. He left it there for a few minutes, letting her body adjust to it, then he began a series of long, slow strokes, out until just the head was left in, then in until his balls touched her pussy. After a while he noticed she had returned to concentrating on licking Crissy, who was moaning and thrusting her hips up toward Casey's questing tongue, so Will figured Casey had adjust. He quickened his pace and before long he was slamming into her hard. He reached around and grabbed her tits, pinching her nipples as he rammed his cock into her ass.

He leaned over and began to whisper to her,"Oh baby, you do have a nice tight ass. I like fucking you. You are a slut but a really hot little slut! Lick that pussy! You like eating pussy huh? You like licking your friend until she cum's on your tongue? You like getting fucked up the ass as you do don't you, you little fucking slut! Take this! Oh GOD!"

With the last Will slammed into her and filled her bowels with his cum. As he did he heard Crissy let out a strangled cry as she came and a second later he felt Casey shutter and start to collapse as she climaxed.

Will popped his cock out of Casey's abused asshole and staggered to the work out mat. From a cabinet on the wall he pulled out blankets and pillows. He spread them out on the mat, then went over and helped Crissy off the table. He took both girls by the hand and lead them to the mat. He pointed to the blankets and with out a word the girls collapsed onto them. Will snapped off the light, sank down between the two girls and pulled a blanket over them.

The last thought as he drifted off to sleep was,"What, oh what shall we do tomorrow?"

He grinned and fell asleep.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It turns out he is a sadist and does love to give them pain. It is to bad the girls did not know they would have not gone to jail as first time offenders being only 18. Both would have been released in the custody of their parents. However, their credibility at school would have been destroyed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
COMMENTS ON COMMENTS

I agree with MOST of Satisfier's comments.

His title "Hot with a Plot" is quite apropos.

The further comments by Satisfier concerning the:

plot

tension

length

psychology

Sybian

were quite observant and incisive.

However, I differ with his thinking that the pussy shaving scenario should have more detail. Having read thousands of Literotica stories over the years, I have read some of those

(too) detailed accounts and skimmed/scanned them.

Comshaw provided just the amount I liked to make it interesting but not too much.

Along the same lines, Catlover69 wished for more detail on the anal episode. I did not feel this as I read.

I would probably have felt that more was more than I wanted.

In answer to Anonymous 02/24/04 (titled: cherry?),

the first attachment that he had on the sybian was a nubbin,

in other words, enough to stimulate the external genitalia/pussy but not enough to penetrate. Crissy did not experience (so far) the later penetrating attachment that Casey did.

Easily

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Paul in Oklahoma

Catlover69Catlover69over 3 years ago
Great story

You are a good writer, but more detail makes a better story. ie When he entered Casey's anus you could describe the sensations he felt along with what she felt.and how these sensations changed as he began to fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
cherry?

how could chrissy still have her cherry after riding the sybian? otherwise a good story

SatisfierSatisfierover 20 years ago
Hot with a Plot

Very hot. Not subtle, but hot. It deserved a rare "5", IMO.

Good to see a story with an actual plot and some dramatic tension on Literotica.

The length of the story was adequate. Too many stories here are over just as the reader starts to become engrossed in them.

Good motivational psychology. The balance between reluctance and willingness seemed realistic.

The story contained some evocative physical descriptions.

The sybian scenes were intriguing.

The pussy shaving was neat, but would have benefited from more detail. Milk these special moments for all their worth. Don't worry about boring readers with the details. Relevant details make stories more vivid.

I am looking forward to more installments of this story.

Thanks for a great tale.

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