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NightOwl47NightOwl47almost 8 years ago
Nothing but setup

I gave this 3 stars, because it is well written. But the site name contains the word erotica. Even the intro chapter deserves a little sexual activity. Chapter 1 just stops too soon. Chapter 2 definitely makes up for it though. I gave the second chapter 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story so far.

Dont leave it too long before we find out if he pays

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