All Comments on 'Perfection in the World of the Dead'

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GorkonGorkonover 11 years ago
Good Zombie story

I like how this has shown an evolution of the zombies. Good action. Would like more description in the sex scenes, but all in all...good stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
oh god that's awful.

Mary Sue at its very, soul-draining finest and easily one of the worst writers of sex on the site.

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