All Comments on 'Pet Annie Ch. 01'

Great story had me stoking...just love to read stories written by women...hope you continue to write more...

More, please?

A beautiful woman giving herself totally, does it for me, even if it is only fantasy. Beautifully written.

Short and sweet, this tale of a Master and his private "pet" is an excellent, exciting stroker with a hint of love. I would like to have seen more, but I gave it a 5 anyway. Just the right degree of pain and domination, without barbarous cruelty.

While I find your prose a little undeveloped, the ability for you to show how devoted this slave is to her Master is very nice. I particularly like the fact that she doesn't speak all the volume of feelings that she has for him. I also like the submissive act of receiving discipline even when she has done nothing wrong.

However, the language choices for the Master and clear youthfulness in the girls voice seem to speak to a more middle class story line.