All Comments on 'Phoenix's Rough Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!!

This was a fantastic story. The characters were so real and their actions were those of a real bdsm couple, motivated by emotion. I really hope you continue.

sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

A little more details would have been nice. I think you can write dirtier. Free you mind!

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