All Comments on 'Photographs Ch. 01'

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PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Great start!!!

Really hot and worthy of several more chapters. Pete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
yay for porn!

Really great stories in your photography series. I like the progression from hesitant model to enthusiastic slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mind Control?

Enjoyed the story but I felt it lacked an introduction to the MC aspect of the story. You spent a long time describing the apartment etc but brushed over the MC part of the cameras function.

''I pointed to the little fob on a chain at the end of my lens and said "Whenever I'm shooting, I want you to look right here so I can get the right angles." I set the fob to swinging ''

This was it. Hinted at MC but I would have thought some better set up of the function would have worked as well.

Good story just lacking this one feature for me.

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