All Comments on 'Pineapples & Chocolate'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Awesome!

Fantastic writing! Hot *and* funny...more please :)

TransverseTransversealmost 15 years ago
Cute

Very funny and memorable in a Juno/Zack and Miri Make A Porno/Pineapple Express kind of way. Hope you add more stories soon; I'll be looking out for you.

Whiskey11Whiskey11almost 15 years ago
Yum!

Loved it! More please....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wooooooooo

i definitely love this, its hot and fun all together. keep writing

taxpapabobtaxpapabobalmost 15 years ago
Shopping for Sex

This is a fine HOT-HOT SEX story. I like it. But the local grocery is not just a meat market for gay men. And the "relationship" here is going to evaporate like dry ice in the sunshine. It would have been fun to describe in warm detail the shenanigans with the chocolate sauce.

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