All Comments on 'Pipe Dreams Ch. 03'

Please post soon, I cant wait to read what happens next.

Still loving this story!

Cliff hangers be damned!!! loving this story.. please write more quickly! :)

woohoo

Feels like we're just about ready for Act II.

I'm looking forward to Lina's reaction to Kane and his were world.

I came here from your Cathera series and realized you absolutely love your cliffhangers.

For sure, please post quick.

Oh my this is too good and now I have to wait hurry with the next installment please....

So... I'll post the next chapter. Everyone will have to wait while it clears the site queue though. A tad longer than this one, I can promise it has many of the answers you seek, a few more questions introduced but it does NOT end in a cliffhanger.

For the commenter that liked the Carthera stories, check out the story Pricolici that should post any day in the gay male section. It's not part of the Carthera world or this one but I hope you will enjoy it. As a bonus, since it's a short story, it's posted as a complete. No waiting for chapters!

Thanks to everyone who has been reading, favoriting and commenting. Now please... no need to burn me in effigy! More coming shortly =)

Can't wait for the next chapter..............please post it real quick

thank you, in general, for posting all your chapters so quickly.

as have to wait for chapter 4 ......on to Pricolici.

enjoying this tale very much, even with a cliff-hanger!! ;0)

i love it .. but come onn ... im dieing to know ... is it her father, a long lost brother... a freind ,a sister come onnnnn ...... i will deffinatly, now ,keep looking for more.maybe you should post 2 storys at once . or maybe have longer chapters..

LJM

Hi again! Thanks for the comments on the chapter everyone! Anonymous... I realize my story pacing is slow; I like to get into the story in a natural progression and not just jump into anything relationship or sex wise unless the story calls for it. I have been posting relatively quickly and I even posted ch. 4 the day after this one went live, the same day a gm short story, Pricolici, went live. I write mm and mf stories so I am posting more than one story; you just might not be aware of it. Ch. 4 should post soon, once it passes the mod queue.

This has been an excellent tale so far & lucky me I have 3 more chapters waiting to be read.

I love the slow build up & character development. I love that its told from Lina's perspective only. I love the chapter length & the cliff hangers. I hope the next 3 chapters posted are at least as good as this one if not better.

The story is a well-told and well-crafted start to an (assumed) werewolf or vampire story. Current rating is "I", but I'm hooked on the plot and the narrative.

Great start!

Anon