All Comments on 'Pirate Days'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow

Though short it looks more like a novel and the illustraritions are just Wow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story with fine insights.

I enjoyed this story greatly.

Jasmynn_BrownJasmynn_Brownalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your kind words!

Thank you for your kind words!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Lyrical, Sexy, Literate

Great story, compelling, interesting, brilliantly written. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great Work

Honest to the core, and a reality seldom seen on this site and in this genre.

SW_MO_HermitSW_MO_Hermitabout 11 years ago
Twisted

Every time I thought I knew where this story was going it twisted off on another tangent. Well written. Loved the analogies and explanations of the driving force for sex and love. I especially enjoyed finding out Randi and Dawna managed to stay true to their husbands and that Ken was true to Dawna. As the story progressed I found myself liking Randi more and more. I also found myself alternating between hating and admiring Dawna as she fought her desire to bed Dan. Well written and thought out stories like this are few and far between. I would like to meet a real life Randi.

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