All Comments on 'Playing With My Heart'

by kynki_grrl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Awesome

Hey Grrl, that was really hot and pretty well written. Id love to see something a little longer, a little slower. heart beat fetishes arent well known about but im glad you posted this, its hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
love heartbeats!

way to go...super sexy and intimate. write more, please!

DemonOuterverseDemonOuterverseover 19 years ago
encore

I remember that you had mentioned the story in Heartbeat Manaics 2 and now have read it a few times. I must say that it is awesome work, but have to agree that it does seem to be rather short...Maybe continue with what came next? I dunno.

I can't wait to read your future stories.

Hell, I just may end up writing a story myself. XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It doesn't get any hotter

I share this interest/fetish too, and I have to say this is awesome writting. It's so sensual, and so descriptive...it's like I'm there. I'd love to have a real life experience like this. I really would like to see more writting from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so great

very nice story, I'm so glad I've found people that share the same fascination!

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