by DaniMonyve
This is amazing . You should definitely make this into a series!!
Ignoring the whole "anal rape double penetration in order to impregnate" for a second, this belongs in the Nonhuman category. The whole Siren thing isn't even a plot twist.
Thank you so much for this...it hit the spot very nicely and I cant wait for the next one.
I don't usually ask for a story to continue when it is write as this is (finishing perfectly) but this could be a magically (not a pun) series. I feel that this is the CORRECT catagory for this story but if it continues (which I hope it does) then perhaps SciFi/Fantasy could place it better...not necessarily non-human. Great start. Use editors they are available, I think you missed a word. Otherwise hope this continues and will look for your writings again.
Hmm not a bad story, I hope you add another chapter. The twist of male sirens is very different
Hello All Fans and Critics!
Thank you all for your awesome feedback. This was my very first erotic story and you guys and gals have made my day by just reading it. Thank you so very much! I look forward to sharing my second installment of the Sirens adventures with you all.
TTFN