All Comments on 'Please Allow Me to Introduce Myself'

by DaniMonyve

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WereLover171WereLover171about 11 years ago
Bravo !

This is amazing . You should definitely make this into a series!!

Ellienora35Ellienora35about 11 years ago
Love it

I love it. Waiting anxiously for another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Ignoring the whole "anal rape double penetration in order to impregnate" for a second, this belongs in the Nonhuman category. The whole Siren thing isn't even a plot twist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wonderful...!!

Thank you so much for this...it hit the spot very nicely and I cant wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
chapter 2 please

I don't usually ask for a story to continue when it is write as this is (finishing perfectly) but this could be a magically (not a pun) series. I feel that this is the CORRECT catagory for this story but if it continues (which I hope it does) then perhaps SciFi/Fantasy could place it better...not necessarily non-human. Great start. Use editors they are available, I think you missed a word. Otherwise hope this continues and will look for your writings again.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 11 years ago
Hmm

Hmm not a bad story, I hope you add another chapter. The twist of male sirens is very different

DaniMonyveDaniMonyveabout 11 years agoAuthor
My Very First Piece...

Hello All Fans and Critics!

Thank you all for your awesome feedback. This was my very first erotic story and you guys and gals have made my day by just reading it. Thank you so very much! I look forward to sharing my second installment of the Sirens adventures with you all.

TTFN

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