by dirtyjoe69
Ummm. . . interesting? I at least have to give you props for imagination. Though I honestly hope that no one gets off on this.
Why did you even write this piece of shit story? I'm normally open minded to the different types of erotica on here, but this story was so fucking retarded. I found the ending really amusing because it was so stupid. I wish I could have the 3 minutes it took me to read this garbage back. WORSE STORY EVER. Too bad literotica doesn't give an award for that. UGH. Don't even pick up a pen again if ideas for a sequel to this nonsense ever crosses your mind
i really like the way the writer told of the bears journey and meeting up with his love. it was a really good read..