Both of these stories are great!! I was just a bit taken aback at the ending though. However you are the writer and had a certain ending in mind. I enjoyed it anyway, it was hottt!!!
I've been writing stories since high school. I even shared a few with my yearbook teacher and got a kiss for endeavors. The stories are from real life experiences and real life fantasies. I write to images I see in day to day life, or wish I did. I hope you enjoy.