by gdavis
What an intensly arousing story! I love the way the tension builds until he arrives at her door. Please write more.
I loved the way you wrote your story so that there was a build up in tension. It was an interesting read and i highly enjoyed it. It'd be fantastic if you could write maybe a sequel to this or more stories in general as you are quite talented.
This was such a hot story. I loved the way you built the tension and sexual excitement to a boiling point. This is most definately most girls fantasies. Great job!
I couldn't stop fingering myself while reading this story! Very well written, nice buildup, the story came across as completely believable! Please write more!
Oh wow, wow, my fantasy come true sooooo good, got me sooo hard... very well written, hmm now all i have to do is find a student like her..lol
sy
I love these stories about somebody reluctantly giving into something they want, but know they shouldn't have. Great story; thanks for sharing!
I love stories about a student seducing her resisting professor! It was so realistic! You are a great writer! Please continue this story!
Wow.. I can't believe a guy wrote this! You have a really good insight into a girl's mind. Very hot story! I shall go read part 2 now.
Wow.. that was the best. I loved loved LOVED IT!! Is it true you're a guy? If so, GREAT job! I wouldn't have believed a guy could write a story like this. (no offense!) But your truly amazing ! keep up the good work. xoxo Ell
The details in this story are superb! All of the erotic scenes were extremely steamy, and I can't believe you wrote so well from the perspective of a teen aged girl...Awesome job!
Kudos on the details; covering sound, sight, and smell make a reader feel a story.