All Comments on 'Public Disrespect'

It was OK for a first story. I really got off when he punished her right there on the hood of the car. Very daring! Keep up the good work!

Congratulations on posting your first story and welcome to Literotica. You have done very well, especially for a first attempt, and I hope you will grow in confidence and ability and write much more you might care to share with us. All I can offer you as advice is to keep writing and I strongly suggest you try to find an Editor; a good Editor is worth her weight in gold.

Thank you, subrose91, and please have four stars.

Its nice, just make it more longer.

Good first story. I suggest devoting a more words to creating the characters and revealing their emotions. It is always nice to encounter a sub with spirit and attitude - very refreshing. By all means - continue writing.

Great story for your first! Hope to see more :)

great start keep it up ,i look forward to reading more from you.

Especially for a first story. Thank you for sharing.

I've written creatively for a long time,, and now thanks to you guys and your feedback, I feel much more comfortable in my attempts to write erotica. Thank you for your comments and advice! I'll keep working in it.

It's not bad, but it lacks creativity. I want to know how he got away with bending her over a car in a public lot. Seems to me the girl was asking to be punished and he fell into her web. He sounds a bit wimpy to give her pleasure for being rude to him.

This was literally horrible!

Totally a hot read, in more ways than one. Please share more of your filthy imagination. I can totally respect a dirty mind.