All Comments on 'Quality Time'

This has got to be the most pathetic story of any kind ever written. Nothing but errors and a story that isn't a story? This sucked, find another hobby.

Why didn't you show us Zoe getting fucked by the wolfman? It would have been so much better then the character imagining it. sigh

Some people can be very rude, but don't be discouraged. If you enjoy writing, by all means do so. Don't let jerks that harshly & cruelly criticize your work get to you. You can only get better if ya' practice. I do agree with the second person who commented though, it would have been much better if the werewolf had gotten into the action...good luck on your next story.

Why even bother writing that there was a wolfman? I gotta say, I don't think I'll be reading anything else from the author. I like sex for just the sake of sex, but....

I tried...really I did. There's just no point, no plot, no action that was worth the effort of reading this story. It's not descriptive, the sex was just bland and pathetic, and what's with the random werewolf that doesn't get any ass in this story? Or, maybe he did, but us readers don't know BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T DESCRIBE IT. It is your responsibility as the writer to paint us a picture and you failed miserably. Better luck next time.

Aroused? No. Confused? Yes. An interesting story, to be sure...

-Sara

what the hell!!!!!this story doesnt even make sense.its a fucked up story.how does the wolfman fit in the story!!!!this story is pathectic.get off and leave it to the professionals.i wasted my time reading this story.

Try again, please.

hi veronica