by MechaBlade
sounds similar to a fantasy of mine except for it being in a school and the 'trophy' that he kept.
For fucks sake people, if your gonna criticize someones writing, have the guts to post your name with your shitty little comment. Personally, I loved it! Good writing, Mecha. You need to post some more stories.
It wasn't half bad. Not the best ever, but not great. A bit hard to understand the basic concepts, though.
I liked it, but the ending left me shaking my head.
The only part I got confused on was the ending...I am assuming this was more, Mind Play? I intend to read more.