All Comments on 'Quarterback Sneak Ch. 02'

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trinisamplertrinisamplerover 13 years ago
not enough!!!!

i think the title covered it alll...this chapter was too short,but keep em coming...please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it!

Great update! I am absolutely loving these two and can't wait for further developments. Keep 'em coming, hun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

HausofgausHausofgausover 13 years ago
Thank you!

Thank you for putting up the chapter earlier than you usually do lol...as always it was a great read, can't wait for the next chapter Alceo is just too sexy mmmm

mekakymekakyover 13 years ago

Can't wait to read more =)

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago
wow

I love this story, he took her so far out of her comfort zone

please update this soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

I love your writing and can't wait for more of Alceo and Galynn:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is a great...

story and I love it! Actually...this is a DAMN GOOD DISTRACTION but I'm going to need you to get back to the story DISTRACTIONS and FINISH IT!!!...lol...Keep up the good work.

cherryontop1973cherryontop1973over 13 years ago
Really enjoying this...

hey girl, i am getting attached to the characters in the new story. as usual the chemistry is hot as fire and the storyline is tight. keep up the good work! so glad to see you back doing your thing. pam aka cherryontop

ccmioonccmioonover 13 years ago
awesome

cant wait for more

Pixie010Pixie010about 13 years ago
Hawt !!!

Whoah... I'm really into this storyline. It's been a while. Welcome back! Love how this is going. Can't wait to read more

vampwrrrvampwrrrabout 13 years ago
Finally!

I've always had a fantasy about fooling around in a library. Thanks for writing what I've been thinking!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Looooving It!

I'm really liking this story, awesome job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not bad

great story, i´m exited to read the following chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Damn! I think I am a little moist!

PHEW! Is right! All that hand and finger action is quite exciting! If he can do that with his hands I can just imagine,what damage he will cause with his mouth and man parts!!!

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 11 years ago
Excellent writing!

One word....EROTIC!

FirediamondFirediamondabout 10 years ago
Homework

I like that she's thinking of getting him to do her homework when usually it's the other way around. I wish her self esteem was better, tho. Women/girls should know how awesome they are instead of being surprised that some guy likes them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unexpected

Fun and quirky and demanding that I read more! :)

J

illwindillwindabout 4 years ago

Wow, so Alceo is just a total dick, huh? Only gets with her in the first place because he is(in his words) 'bored.' So she is literally just a distraction. But of course when that distraction turns out to be an actual person capable of making her own decisions and decides to leave instead of waking him up by kissing his feet, then his little ego just can't handle it.

So to recap; gets with her because he's bored and only seeks her out again to assuage his damaged pride. How can this guys head be so far up his own ass and he still act like his shit doesn't stink?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The only part that bothered me is she screamed in the library. I've been fingered quite well and never screamed. In the library? Really? ~SIGH~ Other than that, I'm curious to see how this ends.

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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