All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl's Kiss'

please carry on with this story there has got to be more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quite a bit of typoes but awesome none the less. Your beginning was so strong than you seemed to rush to get the characters in the sack, a bit sloppily at that. Add a little more detail such as how her outfit looked. Is she a latex lady? Does she dress like she's stuck in the victorian era? Anyway, I am Shade's first fan. :]

Have you heard of the Anita Blake series by Laurell K. Hamilton, this story has an uncanny reminisce to it, except much hotter. This how the Anita Blake Series should be.

Laurell K. Hamilton might not be too happy with this ripoff from her Anita Blake series, down to the nicknames and all. But for me it works.......lol