by JukeboxEMCSA
Hope you plan to continue this story. I would like to learn more of what happens to Vicki and Shauna.
I always love you stories. But you end them off right when I am getting really into it. Just as I am starting to get horny you end it.
~Layah
I hate personality erasure stories like this. They are, for all practical purposes, snuff pieces, and that squicks me out.
You have a great piece here =) As with most of your work, I can't get enough.
I know you like to do a lot of one shot stories but sequel please? X)
I did not like your ending, you left no way for the girls to even get a chance at a cure, you left them mindless. 2 stars
These girls never stood a chance, all they are now are dolls, puppets, don't like mindless people. there is no emotion there anymore.