All Comments on 'Quicksand'

Needs an encore!

These girls never stood a chance, all they are now are dolls, puppets, don't like mindless people. there is no emotion there anymore.

I did not like your ending, you left no way for the girls to even get a chance at a cure, you left them mindless. 2 stars

You have a great piece here =) As with most of your work, I can't get enough.

I know you like to do a lot of one shot stories but sequel please? X)

I hate personality erasure stories like this. They are, for all practical purposes, snuff pieces, and that squicks me out.

I always love you stories. But you end them off right when I am getting really into it. Just as I am starting to get horny you end it.

~Layah

Seriously, I would REALLY appreciate another part to this!!!!

Hope you plan to continue this story. I would like to learn more of what happens to Vicki and Shauna.