All Comments on 'R & R Ch. 01'

Pathetic attempt at a story that's not even a full page

Good start albeit a bit on the short side, waiting for the follow on chapters.

its got a semi-decent start, but this should have been like a ch 00 or something... it was so short just as i was starting to get into it, well... it ended...

its like getting ready for sex only to be interrupted or like many of old age, rapidly lose interest...

Look forward to more.