Rachael's Awakening Ch. 04

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"As I wash your body, you will stand with your feet and legs spread. Even in the shower you must be always accessible to me. Once I have taken your virginity, and you are used to having my penis inside you, I will be fucking you in the shower. You will never know if it will be the morning shower when we first wake up... or if it will be the nighttime shower before bed. It may even be during both.

"Not tonight, but in the near future, there will be another ritual that will occur at some point during our showers. Now, come stand in front of me while I rinse your hair and then I will wash your body as you did mine. The only difference will be that I will not use soap when I wash your vagina. I will give you a douche in just a few minutes and you will hold it in until I tell you to let it go."

Rodger's hands felt good on Rachael's body as he washed her and then rinsed her. She felt her insides quiver when she felt him insert first one soapy finger into her ass and then slowly insert a second. She was unable to stop the movement of her hips as she felt him move his fingers in and out of her dark place and he pressed his thumb against her clit. She ground her hips against his fingers and then jutted her hips back as he moved and touched, moved and touched.

She was not prepared for the sensation of cold as he filled her vagina with the liquid from the douche. She knew she was wet when he moved to insert the tip of the nozzle and felt it slide up inside her. She hadn't realized that she was so slick until Rodger said something to her.

He then washed between her legs as he made her hold the liquid inside and then rinsed her off. Within a few seconds, he stood behind her, gently patted a cheek of her ass and told her she could release the liquid and then he would rinse her inside with the spray and then one more time down her legs.

"All right Pet, step out and grab the big towel. Wrap a small one around your head then reposition yourself at the door, with the towel ready as I step out. You will dry me off as you washed me... then I will dry you. When we are dry, you will grab my robe and hold it as I slip into it.

"Once I have tied the sash, you may slip into your robe and slippers and then we will go down and see about a light supper, which you will fix as I lay and set a fire. Then we will bring our meal into the living room and eat and talk as we sit in front of the fire. "Since it's snowing now, you will be staying here tonight. I do not want to have to worry about your driving across town at this hour."

The two robe-clad figures went down the stairs and headed for the kitchen as the evening stretched out before them.

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Victoria_2001_02769Victoria_2001_02769about 16 years agoAuthor
To Azuldrgon:

Please, don't feel badly that you missed it when it was first submitted. I must confess that I had some <i>excellent</i> assistance with the limo scene, and with Rachael's reminding Rodger of the mess they would make if he continued.<br>

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I am really working at keeping, or trying to keep, Rodger as real as possible. I don't want him to become so far <i>'out there'</i> that the touches of realism and humanity get lost.<br>

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I really am glad you liked this chapter, and I plan on continuing the good work. Besitos mi amigo.

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 16 years ago
Wow

I feel bad because i missed this when you first submitted it. But I love the direction you have taken it as well as a glimpse of Roger's humanity during the part where he starts working on Racheal inthe limo as well as the part where she reminds him of the mess they would make. Continue the good work, hun.

Victoria_2001_02769Victoria_2001_02769over 16 years agoAuthor
To MsMagdalene:

G'day and good on ya!

Thank you for your kind comments and I am tickled that you are enjoying the writing and have been following the series. This is my first story series that I have written from a Dom's pov and I am striving, almost daily... but definitely weekly... to stay in touch with a friend of mine (who is a Dom) in order to keep Rodger as true and factual during this training process and to go slow even when he wants to do otherwise. I am refusing to let Rodger get snared into the "famtasy" type role and going off on a tangent and doing things that "appear" to be correct.

I am working on Chapter 5 as I write this and I want to say that it HAS been a complete joy to write. Keep the eyes peered for this newest chapter in the near future.

Victoria_2001_02769Victoria_2001_02769over 16 years agoAuthor
To Danalearns:

Thank you for your kind comments and I am so pleased to know you are enjoying the story and that you are learning and experiencing about your submissive side as well. I find myself smiling and wondering if you are feeling as Rachael feels... or if you have experienced some of the training in the same ways as Rachael.

Keep your eyes peeled Dana... Chapter 5 has been started and I am working harder than ever to keep Rodger as real and free from fantasy as is possible, and to keep Rachael's training factual.

Brava dear... good luck with the learning/training... and Carry On Dana! *smiles softly*

ms_magdalenems_magdaleneover 16 years ago
Great writing!

i am really enjoying this series, reading about Rachael finding her submissive side and experiencing her training. i can't wait to read more!

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