All Comments on 'Rachel Become A Cum Dump'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
best movie ever

I guess that this would make the best porn movie ever...

Excellent work. Keep on Rollin'

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Superb story, well written, only a personel preferance but not fond of piss, other than that just great - hope to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Awesome

loved it

Wanked off to it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
mutts nutts

superb from start to finish. made me stroke like never before. a director must snap this up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I've cum....

...at least four times reading this story. Did I mention I'm female?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nope

Cheryl's an idiot. Putting the life of one of your actors at risk is stupid since it will trash your company's reputation. And doing so without filming the sex is even more stupid. Cheryl is clearly an airhead when it comes to the business.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
by far one of the better stories i've read!

Man just wanted to say that was exactly what i've been looking for in a story. Ending was a bit humorous, but all in all i got to say man that was great, thanks and keep up the good work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loved it

This story got me so wet. I loved when Jimmy shoved his hand into Rachel's mouth and made her lick off her juices. And Rachel being fucked up the ass by a strap-on and then sucking it? Omg. I would love to be in her place.

-- Maria

idealideologyidealideologyabout 16 years ago
So incredibly wet right now.

Honestly one of the hottest stories I've ever read.

cumdrinkerslutcumdrinkerslutalmost 16 years ago
I can't stop...

cumming to this story! It makes my pussy so wet imaging all of that cum to eat and how rough this girl gets it!

Nameless432Nameless432almost 15 years ago
Nearly perfect

Loved everything but the guy getting his ass ate out.

Tiffanyisaslut6969Tiffanyisaslut6969over 12 years ago
dreams DO cum true

LOVE this. i love the sheer humiliation, the amount of cum, the fisting and did i mention the cum. i would LOVE to be treated like this. hope you dont mind that when i read this and the racheal series i subbed out her name for mine!?!? hehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Soooo exhilirating! And depraved.Somewhat tragic and thorougly a fabulous read(And I'm a gay male)!

AndrewStowAndrewStowabout 10 years ago

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
amazing

god damn... a slutty girl from germany here.... this story got me off so bad!

just got over to my roomates room and begged him to fuck my ass... thinking of being rachel.... waiting for the story of the gang raping her to come!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

One of your classics

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenabout 1 year ago

Rachel is such a lucky cum slut! I love a good cum bath, hot thick cum being pumped onto my face and swallowing that tasty warm salty man juice!💋wendy

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