All Comments on 'Rain'

by Erinbear

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wdelanderwdelanderover 10 years ago
A well written vignette

You did a good job of creating characters and a relationship that feel real, and that makes the sex very erotic. But the thought of getting up at 4am to run just makes me shudder! *L*

adgeonadgeonover 10 years ago
Pretty good

It seems odd that he went straight to have sex just after he confided in her about his wife's infidelity- or maybe that was just a ruse? Whatever, I enjoyed it nonetheless. I'll be thinking about this story when I do my next 4am jogging... in my dream. Thanks.

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