All Comments on 'Raped'

Here I was, all turned on and reading down the page and...the end?? What the heck?? C'mon. Tell the rest!!

tell me mooooore

Great imagination. I liked your story. Please do write more. Maybe some hide and seek, try to escape, captured and torture?

Write me? thetrapper@graffiti.net

I would love to write a story with you.

Trapper

Great, you should continue !!!

This is a good story, but it needs a few things. I think that you'll grow as a writer if you tweak a few things like punctuation, use less slang in the set up, and Finish your stories. Overall the story was a good one, I think with a little work you will be one of the better erotic writers out there.

I really was turned on then BAM! blue balled! :) But it was pretty damn amazing.. just don't leave me hangin again!

I'm so mad! I was getting all hot and ready to go and POOF! End of story! That would've been a pretty good story if it would've had a little more fluff to it :D

i hate these stories where the victim eventually enjoys being raped, that's just nonsense

Like this story, hot

That girl has some serious mental problems... From victim to joyful slut in ten seconds? C'mon...

I have often thought of being raped by a complete stranger, getting impregnated and marrying my rapist. I want to write about this

It's not like the stories when it happens it RL

Omg feeling so hot right now this is a good story to mastubate too

But they weren't done with me yet. Feeling him move out of me I get a second to breath before another cock is mercilessly pounding into my cum filled pussy as my body begins to climb another starts tugging my swollen breasts pushing me over the edge to another orgasm.

They leave me here covered in cum but promise to come back for more later and I cannot wait.

Now make a part two

aaaah~

Maybe try her with some anal next....just saying