All Comments on 'Really Just Desserts Day 03'

by Evil_Teddy_Bear

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Rob ConnerRob Conneralmost 14 years ago
Let The GOOD TIMES ROLL!!

WOW! WHAT FUN and Adventure lay in store for the DYNAMIC DUO? Hope we find out soon! GOOD TALE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

A little more back story would have been nicer to really get the reader to side with the husband. Also, more dialogue would be nice. I know he told them not to talk unless spoken to but that doesn't mean he couldn't have asked them questions about what they did while framing him and what they were doing while he was incarcerated as he took his punishment out on them. I'd also like to see more of the husband messing with them psychologically and turning them against each other. He could make them privately suggest punishments for each other so the one with the worse suggestion gets rewarded while the loser has to gets the winning punished. This would place the women in conflict with each other and undermine their relationship.

Seeing how debbie is a firm lesbian the hero of this story could have made a bigger deal about her having to take cock, eating cum and having orgasms with a man. The physical punishments are handled well enough in this story but more humiliation and mental torture would round things out much better.

There aren't enough revenge stories out there, IMO. It would be nice to see more.

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 14 years ago
Let the Good Times Roll :)

Gotta love the way . he is taking his time and thought things out.

It would probably make one or Both susceptible too being his Sex Slave (Bondage Queen) Cant wait to see Team Competition.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Call me naive but...

Anal orgasm? I must have led a very sheltered life.

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