All Comments on 'Really Wild'

by Saml31

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LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Sexual tension

Even at opportunities for a little sexual tension, the author strips it away.

Example: after being introduced to her trio of fuck-toys, they go to get her a drink. Rather than drinking a little and talking to them to get to know each other better, she just wants to get straight into the sex!

This story could have been reduced to about 5 to 10 sentences, if saving time and 'ink' (electrons?) were the main issue! Three stars ... mundane but nice!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Tyrone

You damn racist cuck. When is the last time you saw a dark dildo named Tyrone? My comment is as ridiculous as your story. I just wanted to write it while it was fresh in my mind.

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