All Comments on 'Recaptured Heart'

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backnumberbacknumberover 18 years ago
it could have been so much better

sorry about the low score, its well written and a good D/s stroke story... but the lifestyle is more then that...its about peoples needs non sexual as well as sexual. You have sara saying she has never been out to a meal with Him and she (justly) feels neglected, you have her saying he tossed her aside 3 times without telling us why. The story really needs to be 3 times as long to explain this to us. Then it might be worth 5+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wishful thinking !!!!

Reminded me of someone I wish would cum back to me!!!! I loved it!!!!Thank you

innocencebegoneinnocencebegonealmost 11 years ago
heartwarming story

She misses him terribly and he misses her just as much. At first, she cannot go through with it until she realizes this is where she belongs; with him. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
God.

I hate the stupid capitalisations in so-called d/s stories.

If they have a d/s relationship, the story must show it. The capitals are a stupid convention, invented by inadequate folk who have no idea of the d/s dynamic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Fool me thrice, shame on who? Even still he acts like she is nothing but a booty call.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

How does making her cum prove anything other than she’s needy and gullible? I was expecting him to at least take her out or agree to expand their relationship. He seems like a real jerk.

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