by Little_Miss_J
i love it but you keep leaving us hanging...as long as you continue the story i will be extraordinarily happy...
leave us wanting more?! Very intriguing story, I just wish it wasn't so short :( Please post soon, can't wait!!
... you need to get the sentences complete, words too. it is distracting to have to fill in what we think are your words, or your thought directions. do keep the story going:D
It would be more interesting if your chapters were longer. Story is good but could stand to be fleshed out.
Thanks