Redemption Ch. 02

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Lucien had to be a gentle Master if he still hadn't cleaved the tiny female's cunt. She looked like she'd been eager to accept him, but since she wasn't bleeding and gaping between her legs, Boy was sure he hadn't taken his pleasure in her yet.

Dare he trust someone with that much restraint? His old Master had taken him as a female a few times before he'd decided to bring out his male traits more. Afterwards, his old Master had used him as a male bottom, taking pleasure in plundering his ass.

Boy Rayne approached the bed, longing filling him. He didn't know if he wanted to continue being taken as a male bottom. He approached the female and slowly climbed to get near her.

She was pretty. To his surprise, he felt his cock stir. Leaning closer, he sniffed her pussy and then took a tentative lick.

She sighed and shifted her hips, her legs spreading minutely.

Boy licked again, realizing he liked her flavor.

"Master," she sighed in her sleep.

Lucien cock filled and he also moved against her thigh.

Boy wanted to taste him too...but didn't dare. The female he could handle if she awakened to find him molesting her, but Lucien...he had no desire to battle a male who seemed to have telekinetic powers as well as at least one hundron stones on him. Boy Rayne was brave, not stupid.

Deciding to indulge in his curiosity, he planted his hands on the girl's thighs and began to lick the sweet tasting fluid that covered her pink folds.

She whimpered and stirred, until raising her head to stare at him wide-eyed.

Tongue still probing her tiny hole for the source of the flow, he showed her his teeth and growled deep, hoping she got the hint and didn't fight him.

She gripped the sheets and sank deeper into the pillow, her legs relaxing in his grip. Her face, however remained with a frightened look which made his hearts clench.

He didn't want to hurt or frighten her. She'd always been sweet to him. He'd been terrified of allowing her to see his disfigurement, abhorring the thought of seeing her sweet face contort in disgust.

He began to purr, hoping it would soothe her as he licked her clean.

Her eyes darted guiltily to Lucien, but returned to watch him lick her. She bit her lip and spread more for him, her breath coming in little pants now. Boy watched her slip her fingers around Lucien distended cock and begin to stroke him too.

Lucien groaned in his sleep, his penis growing stiffer.

She rolled her hips, her honey flowing more to coat his tongue. It was delicious. Boy could not get enough. He liked it. He liked her. He like Lucien.

Leaning over, he took a tentative lick of Lucien's broad cock head. A small bead of fluid appeared at the slit on the tip. He licked again as the girl moved carefully toward Lucien's cock too.

She smiled at him.

"We can both pleasure him," she whispered.

Both?

Boy hadn't thought of that.

The girl closed her eyes and licked Lucien from tip to root. Boy mimicked her, but their mouths met at the top.

They stared at each other for a split second before she kissed him deeply.

Boy was fully erect now...and she noticed.

"If you turn around, I can suck both of you."

A little shiver went through her and Boy noticed how the scent of her arousal became more pronounced.

Carefully, he changed positions. She moved to let him lay close to Lucien.

"Move in closer," she coaxed.

Boy gulped, his eyes darting to Lucien's sleeping face. Would he get angry if he woke up and caught them playing with him?

All thought process ceased when he felt the girl's hot mouth engulf him.

He hissed but in pleasure this time as he watched her take him in almost to her throat.

Her bright blue eyes were on his face as she pulled her plump lips off him. He couldn't help lifting his hips in silent supplication for her to continue. No one had ever sucked his cock before. It was always something he'd had to do to his Master and his trainers. No wonder they liked it so much.

She smiled and pulled on his distended shaft. "Move closer to Master. So I can lick you both."

Boy gulped a deep breath when she gripped both cocks together. The feel of Lucien's cock against his made his head swim and when she slithered her little pink tongue over both shafts, he felt he was going to lose his mind in pleasure.

Lucien obviously enjoyed what the girl was doing because he groaned, turned, and gripped Boy Rayne, fingers fisting in his hair, before covering his mouth in a deep wet kiss.

The double assault was too much stimulation for Boy. His back arched, his balls pulled up and he roared as he filled the girl's mouth with his seed.

As he panted, he heard Lucien snarl, "What-the-fuck."

Lucien did not sound like he was amused.

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SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelalmost 10 years ago
:)

Don't wanna go through cold turkey or hanging by my finger nails soooo I will not read this chapter and the rest untill the last chapter is post. I want to read it in one go. So when the time come please let me know when it's the last chapter. Thanks luv keep smiling and fighting with everyday life obsticals that come in to your ways to make you stronger and develop your mind and soul. When you are feeling down or feel like hitting the walls both in work or health issues etc. just listen to positive song like Stonger by Kelly C (?)....lots of love + bear hugssssss ^_________^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
im so sorry

leva im so sorry and i wish ur husband all the best and i hope he recovers........ take all the time you need .... family before anything... - kyriae

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Sorry :'(

Haven't been able to work on chapter 3 for the past 2 weeks. My husband has been very sick and has just been diagnosed with Polycythemia Vera. He's been in excruciating pain. I will finish the chapter, maybe just upload what I have, but it's hard to write when your man is practically writhing in pain next to you. Haven't even turned the laptop on. That would be mean of me, so I've just been playing nurse and we've been doing research on the condition. Again, my apologies to all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More!

More please! Reluctantly waiting oatiently for more on this story! I follow you on fb but you haven't updated anything about Redemption :( Is everything okay? LW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Sometimes I think Lucien is too hot... He's like the ultimate messed up bad boyfriend that could make you do literally anything with a mere suggestion. Makes one revert to thought processes long ago left behind for what's actually good for you. Love him to bits. I didn't think I'd like boy Rayne from the teaser story you did ages ago, but I really do. Girl Rayne I'm still trying to get a handle on. I like that the person who Lucien lands up connecting with is Zac- it's so unexpected in a way, but it makes sense at the same time that it would be easier for those two to get along.

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