All Comments on 'Renata Gets a Ride'

I loved it!!

it was ok but didnt really get me going

OMG that was very sexy and very sweet!

The characters were well defined and very human in their reactions. Also, your writing style is a lot of fun: "to remind god how great this was".

(Chuckle)

The only problem was the distinct need for an editor, since there were lots of spelling and grammar problems throughout the piece.

Even so, I did enjoy it.